高三基础写作指导
专题三　说明文写作之项目描述
Revision: Introduce a person, a place, an activity by using a sentence.
英文名：Angela
性别：女
班级：高三6班
爱好：唱歌和跳舞
Angela， a girl from class 6, Senior Three, loves/ has  deep love for  singing and dancing.
Tip: 同位语
2. 我校综合楼
面积：523平方米
功能室包括：会议室，图书馆，
实验室以及舞蹈房。

The Multifunctional Building has an area of 523 square meters, including functional classrooms such as meeting hall ,library ,laboratory and dancing room.
Covering an area of 523 square meters, the Multifunctional Building has many functional classrooms such as meeting hall ,library ,laboratory and dancing room.
TIPS: 用现在分词, 用举例来解释。
The Multifunctional Building
3. 我班计划制作班级相册，请每人下周上交一张个人照，要求能体现个人风格和特色。

In order to make our class photo album , we demand everyone hand in a personal photo which can show your character and style next week .
TIP: 用宾语从句，定语从句
Introduce an item, such as a book, an invention, a festival, a production, a cultural custom, in order to give information to the readers.
广东高考：2008年 介绍运动项目“射击”，
2011年介绍引起争议的教育书籍
项目描述属于说明文的范畴，一般是用简明的语言对某个事物、某项活动、某个产品或者某种风俗习惯进行描写，从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
①The Mid­Autumn Festival，which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China，falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. ② Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. ③People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，and it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones at this particular time. ④On that day people usually go back home to have a happy reunion，enjoying a large meal with their family．⑤They will also eat moon cakes，which are round cakes with meat，eggs，nuts and other things inside．
一、观摩领悟
①The … Festival，which is one of the most … festivals in …，falls on … every year.

② Not only is it … but it is also celebrated in ….

③People believe that … is a symbol of …，and it is a custom to express ….

④On that day people usually …，enjoying … with …．

⑤They will also …，which are …．
非限制性定语从句
非限制性定语从句
现在分词
并列句
宾语从句
并列句，倒装句
【结构分析与解读】
(1)高考命题中，项目描述一般以图表式，有时候以图画式或者提纲式命题。要求考生根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究，阅读其中的文字和说明，弄清各种信息之间的关系，提炼和确定出句子主干，然后进行信息整合 。
(2)人称通常用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主，特定时间用过去时。
（3）写作顺序：概括描述—项目影响—项目内容及特点。
二、写作指导
即学即练：翻译下列句子。
1．射击，原先是一种生存手段，到了19世纪晚期才发展成一种运动项目。
2．苹果5，即触屏智能手机，是苹果的第六代产品。
3．太阳能汽车(solar car)，外形与普通车形状相近，但有好些优点。
4. 缺点：价格昂贵；动力不足，最高速度只有70公里/小时.
5. 微信是腾讯公司于2011年1月推出的一款快速发送文字和照片、支持多人语音对讲的手机聊天软件。
6. 京剧，中国国粹，有200多年的历史。
翻译下列句子。
1．射击，原先是一种生存手段，到了19世纪晚期才发展成一种运动项目。（08年广东高考）
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即学即练
Shooting，originated as a means of survival，developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
2．苹果5，即触屏智能手机，是苹果的第六代产品。
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The iPhone 5，a touch­screen smart phone，is the sixth generation of the iPhone.
3．太阳能汽车(solar car)，外形与普通车形状相近，但有好优点。
4. 缺点：价格昂贵；动力不足，最高速度只有70公里/小时.
Solar cars，which get their energy from the sun through solar panels，look similar to ordinary cars，but they have several advantages.
Not only are they much more expensive to buy than normal cars，but they're also less powerful ，with a top speed of only 70 km/h.
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5. 微信是腾讯公司于2011年1月推出的一款快速发送文字和照片、支持多人语音对讲的手机聊天软件。
6. 京剧，中国国粹，有200多年的历史。
WeChat is a mobile text and voice messaging communication service developed by Tencent in China, first released in January 2011.
Having a history of over 200 years, Peking opera is know as the national opera of china.
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写作顺序：概括描述—项目影响—项目内容及特点
（2014年广州一模）
If you were the English teacher, how much would you score these writing assignments?
Can you help to rewrite some of the sentences?
来，这是你的一沓!
Writing Assessment
The white tea is one of the six major tea in china. It famous for his color and in Fujian, Taiwan is rich white tea. Everyone drink the tea can prevention high blood pressure, also assist help toothache and headache.
学生考场作文选1（2014广一模）
Drinking white tea can not only prevent… but also help to relieve the pain of …..
It is famous for its color and   it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan.
学生考场作文选2（2014广一模）
It is one of the six major tea, white tea, because of its color is white. It mainly produced in Fujian and Taiwan, and it has a long history that first appeared in the northern song dynasty. White tea is famous for it like a needle, has beautiful shape and its sweet taste. The special character of white tea can prevention of high blood pressure. People usually drink white tea can beneficial to their health also can treat headache and toothache.
It is one of the six major tea, white tea, because of its color is white.
White tea , one of the six major tea types in china, gets its name from its white color.
White tea is famous for it like a needle, has beautiful shape and its sweet taste.
White tea is famous for its needle shape and sweet taste.
People usually drink white tea can beneficial to their health also can treat headache and toothache.
Drinking white tea can not only be beneficial to people’s health but also ….
Homework
P89<第二轮复习与测试>
(二)基础写作。
你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报的“科技与发明”栏目写一篇环保产品介绍。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息，介绍太阳能汽车。
Thank you
for attending !
备选材料
概括描述—项目影响—项目内容及特点。
White tea, which gets its name from its silver-white color, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. 
Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. 
White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects. 
The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has. 
White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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[参考答案]
Solar cars，which get their energy from the sun through solar panels，look similar to ordinary cars，but they have several advantages. They produce little noise and almost no air pollution，so they're quite good for the environment.Also，as they're comparatively smaller，solar cars are easy to drive and park.
However，not only are they much more expensive to buy than normal cars，but they're also less powerful ，with
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a top speed of only 70 km/h. The biggest problem of all is that they can only be driven about 100 km before their battery needs recharging/to be recharged.
WeChat (Chinese: 微信") is a mobile text and voice messaging communication service developed by Tencent in China, first released in January 2011.[8] It is the largest standalone messaging app by monthly active users.[9]
The app is available on Android, iPhone, BlackBerry, Windows Phone and Symbian phones, and there are also Web-based and OS X[10] clients but these require the user to have the app installed on a supported mobile phone for authentication.[11] As of August 2014, WeChat has 438 million active users; with 70 million outside of China.[12]
Users can register WeChat with Facebook account or sign up with phone number.[13] WeChat currently supports phone numbers of more than 100 countries to register. Registration cannot be done directly through Tencent QQ. But users can connect their WeChat account with Tencent QQ account after registering through phone number.[14]
2．相关短语。
以……出现/起源，
一种生存手段，
发展成为，
被允许，
稳定增长，
历史上两次，
参加，参与，
被认为是，
给某人提供帮助，
与……相似，
从……中选择两个科目，
作为一项运动取得它的地位，
相关的阅读材料，
开阔视野，
给某人提供一个平台
originate as...
a means of survival
develop into
be allowed to
grow steadily
twice in history
participate in
is considered to be(as)
offer sb.help
be similar to
choose two subjects out of...
earn its status as a sport
related reading materials
broaden one‘s horizons
provide sb.with a platform