高考作文复习
英语连接词
一、表递进：
also, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover, next, in addition等
　① Jason teaches diligently. Besides, he writes a lot. 　② English is a useful language. For one thing, it is an official language in the UN. Then, it is widely used in business, science and technology.
二、表解释：
that is to say, in other words, or rather
Eg. These animals are all used to their environment; that is , they have learned how to live successfully in their habitat.
Eg. We stayed at my friend’s house , or rather at my friend’s parents’ house.
三、表示“反意见”：
but, however, still, yet, after all, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand等
Eg. Jim is intelligent but lazy.  Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary, it is very small.
四、表示“因果关系”：
therefore, so, thus, consequently, as a result , now that, because(of), hence等：
Some people are over-ambitious. As a result, they are usually unhappy. 　　
Tom did not work hard; hence, he failed.
五、表示“举例示范”：
For example, for instance, such as, like, namely, etc.
There are some common errors in his composition. For instance, it is wrong to use "he" to replace "the queen".
六、表示“结束”或“总结”：
In a word, to sum up, in short , on the whole, in brief, to conclude , etc.
Some say Singapore is a nice place to live in. Others say it is not so nice. It is too competitive. In short, some like Singapore; some do not.
七、表见解：
In my opinion, personally (speaking),
as far as I am concerned, etc.
八、表让步：
Though, although, as, despite, in spite of ,
引用名人名言及谚语时，可使用如下句型： Just as the saying goes: “No pains ,no gains”. 正像常言所说:“不劳无获".
As the proverb goes: “Every coin has its two sides”. 正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面”.
第一步，审题。
拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用，开始审题.看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么，特殊要求是什么,最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错
第二步，草稿。
1.结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。　　
2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。
3.句式：词写下来了，其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句？能不能用上一个双重否定句？能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句？能不能用一个插入语？等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来
第三步：正式写。
注意，英语作文的卷面简直太重要了，一定要把字写整齐，写大。没有把握的词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。
第四步：检查。
尽管很小心，可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。如，单词拼写，大小写等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象，一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧，请务必留下1——2分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错误。
需要说明的是，英语的开头和结尾是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，不跑题，遵守题目要求，一个漂亮的开头，一个还过得去的结尾，2-3个高级词汇，1-2个漂亮的句子，加上整齐的字迹，作文的分就不会低了哦。所以，精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧。
NMET2007浙江省书面表达：
第三节：书面表达（满分30分）在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。
注意：1．词数100～120，短文开头已给出（不计词数）2．参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围I prefer my English classes to be taught in …
I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. __1__ we all know , a good learning environment is of vital importance__2__ we want to study more effectively in English. _3___, students will have more opportunities to practice listening and speaking.
_4____, everything has two sides. __5____ English is the only language used in classes, some students can’t better understand__6___ the teacher means. ____7___ many slow learners may even lose interest in learning English.
___8___, I like my English classes to be taught in English only.
Young people have been shown to suffer from a lack of sleep. Statistics show that in cities like Beijing and Shanghai, 80 percent young people suffer from fatigue because of poor quality sleep.
There are, however, a couple of tricks for getting a good sleep, such as maintaining an optimistic attitude as well as a healthy diet, or find time for sports. Keep the bedroom clean and avoid tea, coffee, or wine before tucking in.
Young people have been shown not to have___1___ sleep. Statistics show that in cities __2____ Beijing and Shanghai, 80 percent young people are rather tired___3___poor quality sleep.
___4___, if you hope to have a good sleep, you can still follow a couple of tricks. _____5__, you can maintain an optimistic attitude and __6___ a healthy diet, or find time for sports. Keep the bedroom clean and avoid tea, coffee, or wine before ____7_to bed
正反观点/ 前后对比的议论文
一、 构思文章结构
　　开头：提出问题
　　主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由
　　结尾：说明自己观点
二、表示不同观点的套语
1. Different people hold different opinions.
2. Opinions are divided.
3. People have taken/adopted different
attitudes towards …
4. People have different opinions on this
problem.
5. People take different views on this
question.
三、表达不同观点:
1. …of them hold the opinion that ….
2. …of them are in favor of the idea that…
3. People who are for/against the idea
think …
4. Some people believe that…. Others argue
that …
四、不同观点之间的衔接:
1. However, …of them hold a different view. 　　
2. People who are against it don’t think so.
3. However, each coin has two sides.
4. On the other hand, … people object that ….
五. 篇章模式
1. Recently, we had a discussion on whether…..
Different people hold different opinions.
2. …of them are in favor of the idea that…
3. However / On the other hand , …of them hold a different view. They say that…
4. In my opinion / As for myself, It’s wrong/ right to… because…
例一：正反观点

（2005年高考江西卷) 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
赞成理由：
1.广交朋友 2.可自由表达思想 3.利于外语学习
反对理由：
1.浪费时间 2.影响学习 3.可能上当受骗？
你的看法：…
Should students make friends on line ?
Some people say yes .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions ,and even get help with their foreign language studies .
Others , however, think students should not .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides ,some students get cheated on line.
　　It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
例二: 前后对比
<<21世纪中学生英文报>>记者采访了你校 “争做好学生好公民” 活动, 并邀请你就活动前后同学们言行变化写一篇英文报道, 同时发表你个人看法.
活动 campaign 抢座位 scramble for seats
At the beginning of the term, a campaign “ to be a good student and a good citizen” was launched in our school, and great changes have taken place since then.
Before the campaign, we used to be late for school and failed to hand in our homework in time. Often, we forgot to greet our teachers and after class we made loud noises. Worse still, we jumped the queue when waiting for buses and scrambled for seats no board.
However, the campaign has changed us a lot. We are no longer late for school and are more careful in our homework. We have learned to show respect for the elders, help others, wait in line for buses and give up seats to other passengers.
I think the campaign is very meaningful, from which we have learned a lot. More importantly, we have got rid of many bad habits and have become better students at school and better citizens in society.
应用文（提纲类作文）

一、 倡议书
例一：(2005年江苏卷)，假设你是李晓平，是江苏中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题， 根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一份倡议书。要点如下：
1、人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心。
2、人与人：家长、师长、同学，诚信互助。
3、人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护。
4、 你的态度
A letter to High School Students in Jiangsu:
Dear fellow students,
Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”. I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
As high school students, what should we do?
_______, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometown and ____________________our school and class
activities._______, let’s ____ the world ____ love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents, and our teachers.
First of all
take an active part in
Secondly
fill
with
We should also_______each other and help those in need.______________________, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.
_____, let’s work together to _____energy and ________ our natural envirnment, and we must learn to live in harmmony with nature around us.
____________, I will study ____ harder and try our best to do all the above.
care for
Most improtant of all
Finally
save
protect
As for myself
even
例二：假如你是某校学生会主席，请你以该校学生会主席的名义以“校园拒绝零食”为主题，根据下面的内容，给全校学生写一封倡议书。
1）目前学校吃零食现象很严重，有些学生每天花很多钱买零食吃；
2）吃零食是一种浪费的坏习惯；
3）零食大多数为非健康食品，容易使人发胖，甚至生病；
4）还有同学乱扔包装袋；
5）作为高中生，应当养成良好的饮食习惯，拒绝零食。
参考词汇：零食snacks；现象phenomenon；包装袋wrapper
Dear fellow students, our school is preparing to help students develop good habits. ____ there is a serious phenomenon in our school– some students are spending ________ money on snacks. Eating snacks is a waste of a money. It’s ______ a bad habit that we should get rid of. __________, most snacks have too much fat and sugar. They are unhealthy food. Eating too much may _______ fatness and illness. ____________, some students throw the wrappers everywhere. ____ high school students, we should’t act like children any more.
Dear fellow students, let’s form good eating habits and say no to snacks.
But
too much
also
In addition
lead to
What’s worse
As
例三：假如你是假如你是某校学生会主席，你校学生会畅饮开展“捐赠二手书”活动。请你根据下表内容，以学生会名义给即将离校的高三毕业生写一封100字左右的倡议书，发至校园网论坛，陈述该活动的要求和意义。
A voluntary donating activity is called for here. It won’t be long ______ we leave school. Once we graduate, most of our books and magazines will become useless for us. ________, giving away the second-hand books is a good way for us to deal with them. It has many advantages. __________, making the used things reused is a good method to reduce waste. __________, many notes that we took when we studied are good for lower students to study well after they enter senior three. _______, helping others also makes us feel happy.
We hope as many people as possible will take part in it. It’s on June 12, 2008 in the office of the student Union ______ the activity will be held.
before
For one thing
For another
Therefore
Besides
that
倡议书： 假如你是李华，是某一中学高三（６）班的学生，请你根据以下倡议书的内容写一封英文倡议书，谈谈作为中学生如何遵行网络文明公约。
各位同学：
　为了创造良好的网络环境，我提倡大家文明上网，做文明网民。
１、汲取有益的信息，拒绝不良的网站；
２、合理安排时间，