高考英语作文高分写作技法
一、规范英语写作
1、格式错误(有的考生不能正确运用书信或日记的格式
2、词序错误
（1）并列的人称代词作主语时，I没有放在最后
I, you and he are all League members.
(2)没弄清英语中的真正的主语 Without a friend will feel lonely.
(3)修饰语错位
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
对各种时态的概念不清
时间立足点把握不准
母语干扰 汉语无时态变化，学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
考场时间不够，来不及顾及时态、语态
He is working in this company ever since he was graduated from college.
4、不一致
主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致
When one have money, he can do what he want to do.
5、指代不清（代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致）
Mary was friendly to my sister to be her bridesmaid.
And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
6、词性误用
（1）将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time.
(3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly
(5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
(6)名词的单、复数使用不当There are lots of high building.
(7)句子的主谓不一致
A large number of beautiful buildings has been built.
(8) 常用词拼写错误From-form modern-morden
(9) 记叙文中会用一般过去时，会出现不规则动词的过去式拼写错误Hurted, writed
(10)不定冠词的使用错误 Send a e-mail to you, graduated from an university
(11)虚词错误 A．冠词的漏用或误用 My father is worker.B、缺必要的连接词或连接词多余 He likes swimming, I like climbing.
7、句子不完整（常发生在句子写完以后，又想加些补充说明的情况下）
There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
8、用词不当
农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。
The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
9、累赘
He works hard at English. As a result of this, he won the first place in the speech contest.
For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
10、句式错误
My classmates suggest me to study hard.
Welcome you to visit our school.
11、不连贯（句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不通畅）
The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
12、遗漏要点
二、如何遣词
三原则：复杂原则，多变原则和温暖原则。
复杂原则是指可以用一些“牛词”来代替一些“土词“比如说，“
忙于做某事”，一般的说法是：be busy doing sth,使用复杂
原则后，我们可以用be engaged in doing sth.;be absorbed in sth;be buried in sth 等。
多变原则就是当文章中要写两处相同中文意思的词时，善于用不同的词或者词组代换，比如最后一段，两处写到“努力”就可以使用不同的短语“spare no effect”和“try one’s best”。
温暖原则就是，任何一个名词都可以用一个形容词，或者定语从句，或者是同位语从句来修饰，比如这边的working mum,就比“mum”形象得多;任何一个动词或者形容词都可以由一个副词来修饰，如：“a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily”中的happily 就对该剧中的come这个动词起到了温暖的作用。
复杂及多变原则
短语优先原则（短语会给文章增光添彩还能凑够字数）
A、好 fine, ok, nice, great, excellent, wonderful, terrific, fantastic, splendid, extraordinary, outstanding, incredible, amazing
B、大
Although science has made enormous steps In making more food fit to eat, it has, at the same time, made food unfit to eat.
A tremendous explosion broke out.
A titanic force was working.
That is a gigantic building.
The child is big for his age.
We must make massive efforts toimprove things.
C、很、非常
Very, She is very happy.
terribly, I am terribly sorry.
pretty, The movie was pretty good.
greatly, We were greatly shocked at the news.
highly, This story is highly significant.
badly, I badly want to change my .job.
quite, The boss felt quite pleased with my work.
extremely, we were extremely excited at the news.
perfectly, what I said is perfectly clear.
Totally I felt totally exhausted by the time I got home.
D、关于
About, on, concerning, as to, as for, as regards, with respect to, in respect of/to, in/with relation to, in terms of
E、处理,
Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle, do…with, manage..with, encounter
F、忍受
Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure
G、喜欢
Care for I don’t care for baseball.
Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano.
Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about Beckham.
Be mad about My son is mad about football.
Be keen on/about Many people are keen on/about Jin Yong’s martial arts fictions.
Be addicted to He has been addicted to the drug.
Have a passion for She has a passion for rock music.
Have a great enthusiasm
三、如何造句
三套路：适当拉长，英式思维，闪光句式。
适当拉长，可以运用定语从句，并列结构，插入语等方式使得句子变得更加的丰满。“In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .”这边的“in response”就是一个插入成分。
英式思维，要做到不是一直以人作为主语，宁否定不肯定以及宁被动不主动等。如 “Being a good daughter outweighs being a good student.” 就用了动名词做主语。
闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中，运用到了非谓语动词，分词作状语的形式。
英式思维
1、使用非主语成份引出句子
因为主语开头“的单一表达模式已经根深蒂固，很难改变和突破。然而，只要你反复练习，用心模仿，学会用非主语成分引出句子也不是不可能的。
generally speaking, men are stronger than women.
to make a long story short, they found the lost child at last.
Gone are the days when we were discriminated against.
Not a single word did he say.
On the top of the hill stands a splendid tower.
True to his word, he arrived here on time.
Every now and then he went to the net café.
Located on the coast, the city enjoys convenient communications.
2、使用非人称主语
中国学生极易使用与人有关的名称或代词开头.
I thought of a great idea when I woke up this morning.=___________
They didn’t come because of the bad weather.=___________
I couldn’t say anything. =____________
She began to cry. =_____________
I thought of a great idea when I woke up this morning.
= _____________________
They didn’t come because of the bad weather.
=_____________________
She began to cry.
=_____________________
I couldn’t say anything.
=_____________________
3、主动与被动
We must take some effective measures to stop pollution.
4、如何做到行文流畅
要组织一段通畅的英文，构建每一个句子时，要服从三条原则：句子的主题不能变；句子的主语要变；句子的开头必须变
有些句的主题、主语和句子的开头可能是同一结构，但并非总是如此。如果在一段文章中，每句主题、主语和开头都是同一结构，便显出一种学生腔。事实，每个句子的主题不能脱离整段的主题。每个句子的主语会因叙述的内容不同而不同。流畅的段落每一个句子的开头一般是不同的。
闪光句式
利用高级句型生成亮点
A、强调句：将时间、地点、原因、方式等状语从句转变为强调句
It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.
B、倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句
Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car rush at me.
C、形式主语it引出的句式
It is great fun to jump into the river to swim in summer.
D、with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的一个分句变成with结构
With the sun shining brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits.
E、感叹句：用感叹句表示I feel…所要表达的含义
How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the maths exam.
F.排比
如果要你的文章更加精彩的话，以使用多个排比句、多个对偶句、多个不定式、多、动词、多个短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！如：
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple , there is plenty in London for you.
We have got to study hard , to enlarge our scope of knowledge , to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.
G.独立主格结构
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
陈述与感叹
You gave me a pleasant surprise.
正常语序与倒装
I have never seen such a beautiful picture. =_____________________
普通句子与强调句互换
We put off the football match because of the bad weather. =_____________________
简单与复合句
We were shocked at the news. =_____________________
简单句与并列句
He and I help each other. =_____________________
并列句与复合句互换
She did her work carefully and she never made any mistakes. =_____________________
变换句型
一．。。就
I’II tell you as soon as I know.
Hardly had we arrived when she started crying to go home.
I had barely come in when the telephone rang.
No sooner had he arrived than she started complaining.
We had not met for 20 years, but I recognized h:im the moment that I saw him.
Immediately he came home, I told him about that.
On arriving at the airport, he was arrested by the police.
Upon arrival, Darney was immediately arrested as an enemy of the people and thrown into prison.
我认为。。。
I think you are right.
I believe you will succeed sooner or later.
I guess you have made a right choice.
We hold that no country should interfere in the. Affairs of other countries.
In my opinion,smoking should be forbidden in public places.
As I see it, smoking should be forbidden in public places.
From my point of view, chatting on line is a waste of time..
From where I stand, quality is more important than quantity.
As far as I’m concerned, learning English is a piece of cake
It seems to me that buying lottery tickets is a waste of money
I accept the idea that College English Test should be canceled.
四、恰当使用连接成份
连接成分包括连词、副词、用作状语的介词短语和部分独立结构等
一、 表示引出话题：to begin with， to start with， generally speaking， as we all know, as a rule, in one’s opinion, first of all, it is known to all that..*, as the saying goes
二. 表列举: for one thing, for the other, on one hand, on the other hand, for example，for instance, such as, like, also, namely—
三、表示解释： that is，that is to say，namely，be ( more) exact, more exactly, in other words
四. 表示转折: but, not…but, yet, and yet, however, nevertheless, otherwise, instead, though, at the same time, in fact, actually, as a matter of fact,
五、表示原因：because, because of，for, as，sincethanks to, owing to, due to, on this account, result from
六、表示结果： therefore, thus, as a result, so, consequently, wherefore, accordingly, compared to…, compared with…
七、表示对比：while, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, in the contrast，,instead, whereas, however