Writing
高考英语写作高分策略
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
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书写规范 要点齐全

段落合理 字数要齐
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?
堵车真是糟糕透了。
(1) Every day, to have a traffic jam is very bad for me.
(2) Every day, traffic jam is a disaster for me.
活学活用 当堂练习
(凭长相发工资)这条消息让王老师喜上眉梢，让李老师瞬间崩溃。

This news is a blessing for Mr. Wang while it is a disaster for Mr. Li.
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长峡托孤月。
The long straits are lying under the lonely moon.

Lying under the lonely moon are the long straits.
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?
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影响给分的因素之二：
　　　　　　　文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
good

2. think
3.like
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
in one's opinion/view
hold the view that …
it is widely shared that …
love,enjoy,adore,fancy,
be fond of,be crazy about
常用到的句型结构
请判断句子类型
e.g. What a kind boy he is!
How disappointed he was !
感叹句
强调句
e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old granny.
I do hope you can come
if possible.
e.g. Only in this way can you
solve this problem.
There comes the police car.
Hardly had they got to the station
when they met the young man.
e.g. They read while walking or
riding on a bus.
Come to me if necessary.
e.g. I saw a young lady walking
slowly in the street
with a handbag in her hand.
倒装句
省略句
with短语
eg. In my view, bookstore
should be a place where we can
find much useful information.
eg. Let’s come to the main teaching
building, at the back of which stands
the school library.
定语从句
e.g. That’s what I should do.
We should do a favour to whoever
needs help at present.
各种名词性从句
e.g.
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
The moment we reached the farm, we
got down to harvesting.
So long as we work harder at our lessons,
we’ll catch up sooner or later.
各种状语从句
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s.
There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.
改变句子结构 与众不同
改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化
1.He got excited when he heard the news.
→___ the news, he got excited.（doing作状语）
2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty.
→_________________, the girl went home.（adj作状语）
3.It was early in the morning.
Mr. Smith was in his garden.
He was watering flowers.
→_______________ ,Mr Smith was watering___________.
（把三个简单融合成一句话）
Hearing
Hungry and thirsty
Early in the morning
in the garden
使用强势句式，增强语句表现力
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
→_____________we were to see crops and vegetables
growing well! (感叹句）
2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920.
→It was__________________________________.（强调句）
3.He never speaks about his own family.
→Never_________________________________.(倒装句）
4.A boy stood outside the classroom.
→Outside the classroom_____________________.（倒装句）
5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot.
→___________________________________.（倒装句）
How glad
not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began
does he speak about his own family
stood a boy.
Child though/as he is, he knows a lot
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
正确使用有关连接词
first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while
but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
because, since, as,for, thanks to, owing to,
as a result of
what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand,
if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
for instance, take…for example,
That’s to say, in other words, as follows
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
时间先后：
转折关系：
因果关系：
让步关系：
递进关系：
条件关系：
表 列 举：
表 总 结：
though, although, even if, even though
The deadline for our paper is tomorrow. Every minute, therefore, should be made full use of .

(2) The deadline for our paper is tomorrow. Therefore ,every minute should be made full use of .
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Good afternoon, everyone!
    The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit
of Fashion in School”.
Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some
students live a very expensive life …
The reasons why they do so are as follows . _______,
they hope to look smart and special. _______, they want to win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool .
As far as I am concerned , we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _____ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school.______, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.
Thank you for listening!
A. Firstly B. Last but not  least
C. What’s more D. Secondly
A
B
C
D
小结：

1. 作文的卷面-----卷面整洁 要点齐全

2.作文的语言 -----词汇丰富 句型多变

3. 作文的流畅-----结构流畅 一气呵成
Thank you !
Reading
As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere.
Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public.
Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset.
I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice.
(Introduction)
(Advantages)
(Disadvantages)
( My opinion)
(86words)
With the development of science and technology, people are constantly exposed to ads.
Ads benefit us in many ways. It is believed that ads can inform people of new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Advertisements educate the public.
However, there exist some bad effects on our daily life. In the first place, it is a waste of natural resources, increasing the cost of products. In the second place, not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed.
As far as I am concerned, advertising is of use. If we are armed with enough facts from ads, it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.
Appreciating the polished work
(123 words)