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看图写话作文写作技巧教研课《看图作文写作要领》教案15

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注意以下几种作文命题方式
一 .记叙文:通常是看图作文或者给材料作文。
  这是最普遍、最基本的一种文体。写作中应遵循以下几点。〈1〉交待要素,即人、时、地、事。〈2〉按事件发生的先后顺序叙述完整、具体。〈3〉要重点突出,目的明确。记叙文所记的都是过去发生的事,原则上通常用过去时态写。
注意:看图作文写作要领
  1)串联图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等,使之成为连贯信息。2)确定短文须用的时态和人称。3).确定体裁(说明文或记叙文),用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。记叙文所记的都是过去发生的事,原则上通常用过去时态写。4).开头直截了当,尽快入题。5).用最有把握的词语、句型将规定内容加以表达,辅以议论。6).按照合理顺序,适当使用过渡性的连接词,将句子连珠成串。7).结尾要干净利落,要显得自然、恰当、得体
1.看图作文的范文
1.请仔细观察下图, 写一篇100词左右的短文, 要求故事完整, 句子通顺, 可根据需要适当增加细节, 但内容要与图片相符。参考词汇:bare (光秃的),destroy(毁坏)
 
Once there was a village at the foot of the hill. There were many green trees on the hill. The villagers were very
poor. One day, a villager had an idea. He cut the tall trees on the hill and sold them. With the money he had built a new
house. He seemed to have become rich. So many other villagers followed him and began to cut down more trees.
Some time later, no trees were left and the hill was bare.
  Unluckily, the village became very hot in summer and there were heavy storms and floods. Many of the fields
and even the houses were destroyed. The villagers became poor again and even poorer.
2.下面三幅图画是中学生丰富多彩课后活动的一瞥——书海拾贝、球场健身、走进自然。请根据这三幅图画的
内容(可适当扩展),写一篇关于课余活动的短文,题为“Our out-of -class activities”。词数为80词左右。(注
意文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名)。


Our out-of-activities are rich and colorful . We often go to the library to read all kinds of books .We learn a lot in this way(这样). We also do sports .They can help us keep healthy and strong.The most popular sport in our school is volleyball .I often play volleyball with my classmates . Besides , sometimes we go outside to learn the world.For example , we go to the country to study the flowers.Through(通过)the out-of-activities , we learn a lot of things that we can't learn in class.
3.假如你是王林。你所在学校的爱心俱乐部"(Helping Hands Club )" 将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部,请根据下面表格和图片的内容,用英语写一封自荐信。
姓名
王林
性别
男

本人特点
身体健康,学习刻苦,乐于助人,与同学友好相处

“爱心”表现
见图片

加入目的
1、...... 2、......



要求:1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯 。
2.要点须包括表格的四幅图片中的信息,但不得使用真实的姓名和校名等
3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟。
4.词数:80左右,信得开头和结尾以给出,不计入总词数。(画有波浪线的句子是已经给出的)
Dear Chairman(主席),
I am a boy student from Class 1,Grade3.I'd like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.I am well .I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons .On my way home, I often help old people cross the street.On the bus , I always give my seat to the women with babies , and I pick up rubbish in the park.
If I join the club , I will be able to make more friends .Besides, I can do more for others.
I'll be glad if I am accepted .I am waiting for your answer.
Yours,
给材料作文 Wang Lin
1.(2009,朝阳)某英语杂志社“中学生专栏”在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点,用英语
以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文,参加比赛。
学会对自己微笑
1、生活中会有不愉快的事,如考试不及格(请再举一个例子);
2、使你自信;
3、击败你的人有时是你自己。

学会对他人微笑
使人与人更亲近

微笑是一种语言
人人都能懂


注意:1、词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2、参考词汇:—confidence(n.),confident(adj.);打败—beat(beat,beaten)(v.);
3、短文须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;文中不得出现真实的人名、
校名等相关信息。(画有波浪线的句子是已经给出的)
Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude(态度)to life. In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, you fail in
an exam; or another time, you are misunderstood by your friends. These unpleasant things may make you feel bad.
Then what will you do? Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence.Sometimes,
the greatest enemy(敌人) is yourself; that’s to say(也就是说), sometimes, you are beaten byyourself. We should
also learn to smile to others. It will help us to get closer to others. So, smile is the most widely understood language.
二、日记 (Diary)    这是把自己当天生活中经历的有意义的事以及见闻或感受记录下来的书面形式。由于记载的内容通常已经
发生,谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况,用其它时态。文体自由,通常用第一人称写。格式:
第一行的左上角是日期(月、日、年)、星期(可将其放在日期前或后, 星期和日期之间不用标点,但要空一格)。
右上角写上当天的天气情况,如:Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy等。日记的正文是日记的主要部
分,写在星期和日期的正下方,可以顶格写,也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。
日记的范文:
March 12th, 2003, Tuesday Sunny (Fine)      Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the students in our class met at the school gate. We walked
to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard, and we planted
about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired, we still felt very happy.   2.(2009,莆田)下面一组图画描述的是上个星期天发生在宁波雅戈尔动物园里的一个故事,请你用第一人称
写一篇英语日记。(画波浪线的是已给出句子)

注意:1、日记格式及开头、结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。2、词数:80左右。
3、参考词汇:some food left;… throw away / about; give… to; zoo keeper; come up to; feed June 4th, Sunday
This morning my parents and I went to visit Ningbo Youngor Zoo and we had a picnic there. We had a big lunch
on the grass, but there was still some food left, like bananas, apples, bread and so on. “What can we do with these
things? Throw them away!” I said to my parents. But my mother didn’t think we could. Then I said that we could
give them to the monkeys. My mother agreed that it was a good idea. We were going to feed the monkeys with our
food when suddenly the zoo keeper came up to us and said, “Please don’t feed the animals!”Then we said sorry to
him and went on with our visit.
三、书信(letters)  一般分为私人信函(Personal letters)和正式信函(Business letters)。英文书信从信封到正文,其格式与汉语有
许多不同。
书信主要格式:
1)称呼(Salutation),称呼就是对收信人的称呼。从左边顶格写,占一行。通常在称呼前加上Dear。
2)正文(Body),正文是书信的主要部分。正文从称呼下隔一行开始。
3)结束语(Complimentary Close)和签名(Signature)
1)英文信常用的开头语
① I am very glad to hear from you.或 I am glad to receive your letter很高兴收到你的来信。 ② Thank you for your letter. 谢谢你的来信。 ③ I was very pleased ( happy ) to receive your letter of February 6, 2001 … 很高兴收到你2001年2月6日的来信…。
④It is a pleasure for me to get your letter. 收到你的来信,真是高兴。 ⑤How are you?Thanks for your letter。你好吗?谢谢你的来信。 ⑥ How is everything going? 一切会是怎样?
⑦I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How are you?我很久没有你的来信,你好吗?
2)英文信常用的结束语
① I hope to have a letter from you before long. 希望不久能收到你的来信。
② Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself.  请快点给我来信,并谈谈你的情况
③ Give my best wishes to you. 或Best wishes! 或Wish all the best!呈以最好的祝愿。
④ I'm looking forward for your answer.Please write to me soon 我期待着您的回信.请尽快给我写信
⑤ Hope you are healthy. 祝你健康。
书信的范文:
1.假如你叫Li Ming, 中学生,经常收听音乐节目,请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。信的要点如下:(1)你
很喜欢这个节目,特别是英语歌曲;(2)学习很疲劳时,你会打开收音机,听这个节目;(3)从英语歌里你学了很多单词;你最喜欢“My Heart Will Go On”这首歌,希望得到歌词(the words of a song)。
注意:信要通顺连贯;词数70左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数
Dear Mr Liu,
How are you?I'm a middle school student. In my spare time, I'd love to listen to the radio, especially the programme you present. When I am tired, I usually turn on my radio to relax. I enjoy the English songs in the programme most. From the songs, I learn new words. It is helpful in my study of English.
I was wondering whether you could help me find the words of the song My Heart Will Go On, as it is one of my favourites.
I'm looking forward for your answer.Please write to me soon. 
Yours ,
   Li Ming
2、(2009,通化)假如你是某贫困地区的一名失学儿童,名叫李文,你很幸运地得到在北京工作的一位名叫刘羽的人的资助,得以重返校园继续学习。于是在2002年10月2日你给刘羽写一封信表示感谢。
(1)收到书和线能重返校园,非常感谢;(2)在老师的帮助下,学习上取得了很大进步;(3)老师表扬了你,家长鼓励你;(4)你下决心更加努力学习,取得更大进步;(5)你盼望见到刘羽但因没有机会去北京,希望刘羽给你寄张照片。
注意:1、按书信格式写;2、词数90左右。
Dear Mr Liu Yu,
I’m glad to receive your money and books. Now, I can go to school again. I’m very happy and thank you very much.
I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts, I have made progress in my studies. So our teachers praised(表扬) me for it. And my parent encouraged me. I have made up my mind to study hard and make even greater progress with the teachers’ help.
I hope to see you, but I have no chance to go to Beijing. Would you please send me a photo of you?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Wen
四、.通知和便条(Notice , Note)   一般至少有口头通知、书面通知两种形式,至少包括3项内容:时间、地点、活动内容。
中考书面表达口头通知的卷面表现形式如下: Ladies and gentlemen , Attention , please ! ____________________________ _____________________________ That's all . Thank you
1.口头通知的范文(注意口头通知的开头语和结尾语)
李竹月是科代表,英语教师要求她用英语发表一个口头通知。内容是周一下午3点,在学校会议室办一个讲座,特地邀请北京外国语大学张教授来讲解怎样激发英语学习兴趣,提高英语成绩,请同学提前进场,并作好记录,讲座结束后,每个同学写一个学习英语的计划。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please?I have something to tell you .There is an English lecture in the school meeting-room,at 3:00 on Saturday afternoon. Professor Zhang ,from Beijing Foreign Studies University,will be invited to give us a lecture on how to become interested in English and improve our English .All should be present ahead of time . Do remember to take a notebook and a pen with you.After the lecture ,everyone should make a plan for English study.
That’s all .Thank you (for your listening).
2.书面通知的格式: 1 )标题:在正文上面正中的地方写上 NOTICE . 2 )正文:包括具体的时间、地点、活动内容和注意事项。 3 )单位:发通知的单位一般写在正文的右下角。有时也放于标题之上,起强调作用。 4 )时间:一般写在左下角。有时也写在发通知单位的下面 书面通知的范文
假定你是学生会文体委员。请根据下面的提示写一篇100字左右的关于暑假郊游的书面通知。
要求:通知必须包括表内所列全部内容,可以适当安排内容的顺序和增加细节,使其连贯,完整。
参加者:初中一、二年级的学生
活动内容:6月25日去香山公园爬山;在山顶野餐;参观植物园。
集合时间和地点:早晨七点集合,七点二十分开车;学校大门口前。
注意事项:穿运动鞋;自带午餐和饮用水;准时集合;参加者在本周四直接到学生会报名。
Notice
The students of Junior Grade One and Two will go to Xiangshan Park on June 25th. We will climb the hill and have a picnic on the top of it. After that ,we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby. Please put on wear your sports shoes and bring your picnic lunch and drinking water with you .We will meet / get together / in front of our school gate at seven o'clock in the morning. The buses are going to leave at 7:20. So be sure to come on time. Those who want to go should come to the Students’ Union to register(报名) their names before Thursday.
The Students’ Union
June 20th,2004